Being celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems.
These days, more and more people are discussing their views about merits and demerits of being celebrity. The question is whether being well known personality leads to more advantages or not. The present examines this issue in detail and put some points of mine which claims that being celebrity brings more benefits.
To begin with, it is irrefutable to state that celebrity are extremely popular in our society and that brings immense responsibility among themselves to continue similar kind of work in future. When a person is considered valuable and responsible, they will have utter confidence to take up challenges and prove their proficiency in their respective domain. Although, some people claim that there are some flop stars who are really depressed by not continuing similar kind of work but in my opinion these population below marginal. So being popular figure is always challenging and is the best source to drive oneself to be more hard working and creative.
Another advantages that must of celebrity enjoys are tremendous fortune that ordinary people always aspires of. Even though mediocre people try their best to earn a wealth by extreme hardships, They can never earn those fortunes which movie or sports stars can earn. The primary reason behind this fact is that their work have huge impact in society, that is why their reward are incomparable. A recent TV survey also , for instance, claims celebrity earning in general are 40 to 50 percent higher than ordinary people. So with this fortune, they can live luxurious life.
To recapitulate, being famous brings immense pleasure of fortunes and fame and celebrity life is always vibrant as compared to ordinary people. Thus in my opinion, being famous is truly advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, thus, well, for instance, in general, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17192982456 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61842125795 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7230206221 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2859371192 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997899667522 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849625798637 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195623514774 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112794067904 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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