Being a celebrity – such as famous film star sports personalities – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems.
Like the two sides of the same coin, being a well known personality has its own pros and cons. In my opinion, being a celebrity brings more benefits, like wealth and fortune along with being center of attraction of the society.
Firstly, superstars strike great deals just because of their fame. They earn millions in a day, by merely working for short durations. Experts from other important fields do not have the benefit of earning at par, in spite of their equal hard work. Moreover, big names mostly from the field of entertainment live a luxurious life, which is desired by most of the people. At times, this is a result of their own hard work or it is being passed on from generations to generations. Few individuals barely have any talent, yet they are quite famous, as this fame is inherited from their parents. So, the well known celebrities do not have to worry about their child’s future, as their fame and fortune is more than enough for their child. To illustrate, Amitabh Bachan, the super talented and the most popular Indian actor has won zillions of awards for his acting. However, his son being not so talented, has still won awards and is popular because of his father. Therefore, being famous is really advantageous.
Secondly, few renowned actors are considered as gods in their country. They are also center of attraction, wherever they might travel in the entire world. Also, they are role models for the youth and the reason for motivation for numerous people for achieving their goals in life. For instance, Rajnikanth, a south Indian actor is worshiped as God in south India. People receive a paid holiday to just to watch his movies. In addition, they are the latest trends on social media nowadays. They have huge fan followers and are highly respected in the society. Therefore, it is certainly clear, that being famous has countless advantages.
In conclusion, I concur that being well known in fields like entertainment or sports has numerous benefits. I also believe, that many people desire to be famous someday, in spite of the problems and hardships that celebrities come across every single day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88736263736 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56369616743 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563186813187 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8703642839 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.8636363636 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.59090909091 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215830983216 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595528100837 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081279161101 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167993939793 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108151861313 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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