Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and caused to helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this statement & give your opinion.
Since time immemorial, the reference of sports with animals have been existed. However, mortality of this procedure is contentious issue. The ecological and sociological discoveries have casted light on blood sports as inhuman activity. I strongly condemned the blood sports; due to its worst effects on both animals and humans. This essay will use examples to explore negative consequences and will give concluding view.
To begin with, blood sports is intuitively perceived as brutal act. Every year 13000 animals die on the name of entertainment in various fight such as bull fight, cock fight and dog fight to name a few. Moreover, blood sports have also became as a business of high scale gambling, which is illegal in all countries across the globe. In fact, blood sport's administrators stimulate drugs in animals to increase their energy so it can win the fight and alternatively, they can win the gamble. which is again an inhuman act. Seen in this light, it is broadly believed that blood sports are fatal to life of animals and is a cause of various illegitimate activities.
Another insight that must not be neglected, meanwhile, many behavioural experts believed that viewing blood sports on regular basis have negative effect on brain and promote violence. In addition, even children are spectators of this event, watching violence from tender age indulge them in destructive behaviour. As a result, when these children are grown up they become insensitive with humans and animals. According to empirical research; majority of children who are associated with blood sports develop mental disorder and behavioural aggression in their later. Consistent with this line of thinking, it is strongly agreed that blood sports should be banned.
In conclusion, there are ample evidence suggesting blood sports as a cruel act because it not only hampers animals and humans but society as a whole. I raise voice against blood sports and it must be banned with immediate effect world wide. It is predicted that if we will work to eradicate inhuman practices of animal cruelty, we would be able to turn this universe into better place to live for all inhabitants including humans and animals.
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...abitants including humans and animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18207282913 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72773621257 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585434173669 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0008696685 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3684210526 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346597996037 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10292097254 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627272372971 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200467982835 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176843107752 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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