An item of clothing you purchased but found some issues with it once you returned home. Describe:
1. What item was
2. What were the issues
3. What you expect from store Manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about apparel which I have bought yesterday. I am your regular customer and possess platinum membership card of your store. I have purchased many items just because of its supreme quality, neat stitching and proper size. This time I was enticed with hot seller t-shirt and trousers. I immediately purchased it without any doubt as I already have trust and have experienced your stuffs.
Upon returning home, I found three major problems with the clothes. Firstly, the t-shirt is of sub-standard quality which means that 80% of it is polyester & 20% cotton which makes it a warm fabric and unsuitable to wear it in this scorching summer. Secondly, the embroidery and stitching of the t-shirt has loose threads which mean that either it is an old stuff or amateur tailor has sewed it. Lastly, the trouser is of an appropriate size, across the globe medium sized trousers is of 36 inched length whereas the one I bought is of 34 inches. I was wondering that despite labelling the product as hot-seller it is neither upto the quality standards nor according to the season.
I am returning these products and expect to get refund or exchange within two business days. Moreover, I also want to advice to check the parameters before making any product as hot-seller or fashion trendy. I expect that my complain would be checked vigilantly and addressed timely.
Yours sincerely,
Amber Kherani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...platinum membership card of your store. I have purchased many items just because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95918367347 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62835922059 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644897959184 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6845563237 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0774388188184 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270083194541 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330182929365 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488140939158 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00761505206776 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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