Some people think watching movies is a waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Various genres of movies are filmed to entice audience according to their preferences. Despite this, it is thought by some that viewing movies is a wasted effort. In my opinion, I disagree that watching movies is wastage of time as it will help viewers to get entertainment of their choice and be aware of social and political issues.

To start with, a good reason for fame of movies among individuals is entertainment. Admittedly, fast paced life make people busy and eventually have less time available to rejuvenate. Watching movies in comfort zone is not only the source of entertainment but also helps them to combat with daily stress and anxiety. According to result of empirical study three quarter of people revealed movies as a positive feat to both mind and people. Thus, it is agreed that spectating films are the pleasure activities for the people.

Another point to consider is that movies show various social and personality development attributes, watching these not only provide awareness but also help people in developing positive skills. For example, famous Bollywood movie named Ankur Arora murder case, the film directed on the social issue pertinent to medical negligence which aware people about possible ways to file lawsuit. Moreover, another movie Hollywood movie House of cards, which teaches viewers ways to cope up with, struggles of life intellectually. Therefore, concept of motion picture enhances skills in people.

To conclude, movies are source of enjoyment and enables person to relax from hectic daily routine and it also build characteristic values in personality. Hence, I strongly believed that watching movies is not the wastage of time.

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Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'builds'?
Suggestion: builds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29739776952 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76038763857 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2640209667 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.785714286 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23168857746 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803967175084 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492695646083 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142890114369 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025035521518 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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