Some people think that the media newspaper have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
Some people think that the media newspaper have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
Since last few decades, media has freedom of speech which means that they are allowed to articulate their idea and opinion without the fear of censorship. Despite this, it is argued that media must have restricted rights to showcase the private life of people. This essay will first discuss the importance of publishing about personal life and secondly the need of stringent media controls followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To start with, those who proclaim the coverage of private lives of people by media, concentrate on lives of politicians and artists. They believe that personal lives of diplomats are good criteria for showing how loyal they are with their slogans. For instance, the president Obama who advocates gay rights, really respect gay in his personal life. If not, means he is not trustable. Similarly, artists, celebrities and social workers are the role model for society, it is mandatory to publicize their personal life so people adopt their life style. For example, many people in Pakistan are admired by Abdul Sattar Edhi, a down to earth person with simple standard of living yet owns largest network of ambulance and dedicate his life for humanity. His admirers opted same lifestyle. Admittedly, it is agreed that media played a positive role by publishing personal lives of people.
Another insight that must not be neglected, people either the diplomat, artist or social worker have their own life and media should respect their privacy. Undoubtedly, people feel discomfort when media invades in their personal life. Bollywood actress Divya Bharti committed suicide in 1992 due to publication of her personal 18 plus photos in a magazine known as “Indian Times”. Indeed, such incidents are question mark on the liberty of media. Thus, it is undeniable that media should have restricted rights for publication.
To conclude, media has the power to influence people. However, the contents of publications must be controlled in order to safeguard the privacy of people, celebrities and politician. It is predicted that if controlled rights are provided people will have information and alongside privacy will be maintained.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 680, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'owns the largest'.
Suggestion: owns the largest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31818181818 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70031570171 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57486631016 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9940412105 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400823865463 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117823557853 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168274925111 0.0667982634062 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30928464949 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.331382546859 0.056905535591 582% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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