car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "One big traffic jam" how true do you think this statement is?
what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars
Technology has made the production of cars cheaper and affordable that everyone can at least afford one. I agree that this has increased traffic jam in this recent years and that government can control this problem by considering a number of measures.
Firstly, the should encourage the use of public transport. This will help reduce the number of cars on the road at a given time. Also, it will help, if the transport fare is reduced to encourage the masses to join public buses. It's also necessary that they create more bus stops and make preparation to introduce train and tram to the people to make life less stressful.
Secondly, the taxes on new vehicles should be increased to discourage people from purchasing new cars. This will help reduce the cars on the road. The more cars on the road the more congested the city will look. For instance, the third mainland bridge in Lagos, we have over three hundred cars on it every morning. As a result of this traffic, we spend double the normal time to get to our destination.
Also, another approach is to move some of the big shopping malls and markets to satilite towns. Moving Shoprite, The Games, Mr price and Balogun market to outskirt of town will help reduce the number of automobile that come into town. In addition, build more parking lots for cars going in and out of this malls, to help reduce the traffic on the road caused by cars at the entrance of this places.
In conclusion, it will be nice to get rid of traffic jams on our roads. To achieve this, government should encourage the use of public transports, impose levies on personal cars and as well, move some of the markets and shopping malls to the suburbs.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'at least', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246987951807 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.147590361446 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078313253012 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0301204819277 0.0501214627716 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0301204819277 0.0437548338989 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123493975904 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0331325301205 0.0403226058552 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39077858076 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451807228916 0.0326793684256 138% => OK
Particles: 0.00301204819277 0.00163938923432 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.129518072289 0.0861772015684 150% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0331325301205 0.021408717616 155% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00301204819277 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1690.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 300.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63333333333 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306666666667 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193333333333 0.28420135186 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143333333333 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0966666666667 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39077858076 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 53.5401470475 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.75 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4337396535 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 38.0833333333 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.94202898551 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280373205434 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137997085101 0.102741220458 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0943317085025 0.0668466124924 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.611335392191 0.534860350844 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110631203475 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130773971044 0.134430193775 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416339282521 0.0742795772207 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.410014495412 0.324371583561 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.14030133788 0.0638462369009 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198625477049 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411716099893 0.058150111329 71% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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