Childcare has always been of primary concern and importance. Do you think that courses designed to help mothers are necessary or can they acquire the essential knowledge through personal experience? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Child is most expensive gift to a mother and father. To every parents, it has always been the most significant concern as well as importance to take care of their child. Sometimes, we feel to get admitted to a course which is designed for new born mothers. In other hands, few mothers like to gain indispensable data from the previous experience of older family person. This essay will showcase positive & negative points of taking admission for these courses and personal experience along with a proper example to support my opinion.
In my opinion, opt for specific course is a good idea to obtain adequate information. Let’s talk about positive points. Firstly, these courses are designed in such a way that new parents can understand the child psychology in more efficient way. For example, it is one of the most vital issues to understand why a baby is crying and how to make him or her avert. Secondly, in the present days, we are in the busiest time zone, such institution provides tips to manage time for both mother and child. As an example, mostly working mothers feel helpless in order to manage timing. Considering the negative points, some people are unable to pay such huge amount of money to take a part of these lesson.
Now coming the personal experience, which is free for all and can be acquired from family members who are experienced than new born mother. They can help in numerous ways to let one understand a child.
In conclusion, both processes are good for mothers with recently born child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 692, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this lesson' or 'these lessons'?
Suggestion: this lesson; these lessons
... huge amount of money to take a part of these lesson. Now coming the personal experienc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85171102662 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58271953519 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3927640969 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164014590126 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529443275995 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373379647694 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1000680798 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557314085672 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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