Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
In many countries, the state take the responsibility to educate children by giving them free provision, as school education cost a lot of money. this essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. this essay will first demonstrate the benefits of state provision, secondly an analysis of primary disadvantage, followed by the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are several rationales to justify state-sponsored education. On the first hand, it gives an opportunity to the unprivileged families to educate their children and fulfill their dreams. For instance, there are so many children from less affluent families who, because of state provision are fulfilling their dreams. secondly, it also benefits the country as a whole, to be more specific, being able to offer free education and training to young generation means, this nation is focusing on generating a well-educated and trained workforce, which will lead to further advancement. To illustrate, take for example Singapore, who has sponsored, free school and university education for children. Consequently, they have highly skilled manpower contributing to their development.
however, on the contrary, those opposed to this says that state provision to schools could rise controversies, as the parents who do not possess any children will have to pay the tax, to support this government program. Besides, other sectors such as health, and infrastructure may lack behind, as a substantial amount of money will go in school funding. however, a policy of free education is beneficial in the long run, as it will result in a highly educated and qualified workforce.
To conclude, the pros of, government provision to districts for children's education far outweighs the cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46350364964 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10916562178 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7380749774 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152245415232 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568015368791 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498252344434 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109330302402 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312519514713 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.