You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
* state your reason for writing
*describe the problems and explain how you feel
*propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear manager ,
I would like to express my regret about experience which we had on your restaurant on last friday. I had booked a dinned hall for 15 people 3 months back. For that, I was expecting to be a very pleasant enviroment and wonderfully service for our annual office meeting .but unfortunately, when we arrived in restaurant, waiter told us it is very difficulty to manage the full people dinned in one hall. So, he asked us to sit us separately in two different hall . In addition to, when they served the food it was not full rich manu in buffet. As i had requested for vegetarian food for few our colleagues which were also not available. waiter gave us reason, vegetarian cook is on leave for today . Apart from that, Behaviour of staff was not friendly , after that when we finished our dinner we decided, not to pay the bill. but waiter warned us he will call police if we will not pay the bill . we paid the bill to avoid the further embarcement . Now i request you to return back our full money . And please take necessary steps to avoid this type of instances again. </span><br>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s;font-size: 19.36px;'>Dear manager , I would like to express my regret a...
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Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...font-size: 19.36px;'>Dear manager , I would like to express my regret about ...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I had booked a dinned hall for 15 people 3 months back. For that, I was expecting...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ly service for our annual office meeting .but unfortunately, when we arrived in re...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hall' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'halls'.
Suggestion: halls
...s to sit us separately in two different hall . In addition to, when they served the ...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... sit us separately in two different hall . In addition to, when they served the fo...
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Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...it was not full rich manu in buffet. As i had requested for vegetarian food for f...
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Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiter
...lleagues which were also not available. waiter gave us reason, vegetarian cook is on l...
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Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n, vegetarian cook is on leave for today . Apart from that, Behaviour of staff wa...
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Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for today . Apart from that, Behaviour of staff was not friendly , after that w...
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Line 3, column 753, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at, Behaviour of staff was not friendly , after that when we finished our dinner ...
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Line 3, column 828, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...dinner we decided, not to pay the bill. but waiter warned us he will call police i...
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Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ner we decided, not to pay the bill. but waiter warned us he will call police if ...
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Line 3, column 897, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... call police if we will not pay the bill . we paid the bill to avoid the further e...
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Line 3, column 900, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ll police if we will not pay the bill . we paid the bill to avoid the further emba...
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Line 3, column 949, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he bill to avoid the further embarcement . Now i request you to return back our fu...
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Line 3, column 956, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to avoid the further embarcement . Now i request you to return back our full mon...
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Line 3, column 973, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ther embarcement . Now i request you to return back our full money . And please take necess...
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Line 3, column 999, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...equest you to return back our full money . And please take necessary steps to avoi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65174129353 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00314184592 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9336784852 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0644007468989 0.216113520407 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249192928005 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274226214021 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538116341347 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00159649932095 0.0580467560999 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.