Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Recently the most important trouble in the world and the nature is climate transforming. Some people believe that, stop using fossil fuel, would help to reduce climate changes. I totally agree about using natural energy instead of gas or coal. I admit this view because of three main reasons such as, the importance of environment, the irreparable effect of harmful fuels and the running out feature of gas and coal.
Firstly, environment is one of the important issues in our lives and the climate change could be harmful for plants and animals or even human beings on the earth. For example, transforming climate to warmer type, could melt the ice of the pole and extinct the penguins. As another example, industrial fuel makes pollution and put them in the air, as a result, we face the problems of global warming. Actually, environment is much more important than economic problems of the industries.
Secondly, some harmful effect of the industrial fuel might never become recompense. In fact, by changing the climate, something happens that is too difficult or impossible to resolve that As a matter of fact changing in climate might extinct some species which can live in particular climate. So the extinction of animals is one of the unpleasant results of changing the climate and it is impossible to have that kind of species again.
Thirdly, in my point of view there is a lot of natural resource. That means fuel such as gas, coal and … would be running out and human have to find a replacement some other time in the future, so it is better to pay attention to the environment and change their fuel sooner. For example some powerful governments like Americans try to find some other way to replace with common industrial fuel because of the lack of their access to them. Then it is possible to use the natural kind of energies in order to have a replacement plan for finishing the industrial fuel.
To sum up, Climate changing would be one of the considerably important subjects to discuss and there are some reasons for that such as, fossil fuel. Although some people agree to use other energy resources such as wind, there is finding economic problem for industry. I agree with changing the resources into natural resource.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example', 'in fact', 'in particular', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244075829384 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.137440758294 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0947867298578 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042654028436 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0308056872038 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137440758294 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0284360189573 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60206164923 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355450236967 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00473933649289 0.00163938923432 289% => OK
Determiners: 0.10663507109 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189573459716 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00473933649289 0.011925033212 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2241.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 384.0 316.048096192 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8359375 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341145833333 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278645833333 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106770833333 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60206164923 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.4992400938 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3333333333 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0675832036 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.1979166667 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.94382022472 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247981148658 0.332605444948 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150140461068 0.102741220458 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0731124586558 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571573614494 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158164062618 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110747959838 0.134430193775 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587980853104 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.435895776461 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0359775343322 0.0638462369009 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186858812749 0.228012699653 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435381910554 0.058150111329 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.