Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
• comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
In this modern world, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the effectiveness of the communication method. Different people prefer different communicational channels as their medium of getting information. In this essay, I shall discuss on the positive and negative aspects of each media to greater extent.
First and foremost, we will discuss about books which we can use to acquire knowledge on various subjects from medical science to aesthetic subjects. People can visualize things by reading books and it creates the avenue for innovations. Besides that, people can keep books for future refernces and it is portable as well. Therefore, books can play a pivotol role in providing information to the society. The drawbacks of books are the cost, because it is relatively higher than the other methods of information.
When we consider about radio, it is one of the fastest method to deal in emergency situations. But, in some ocassions it is difficult to transmit information to different areas due to technical issues. When we consider about televsion it is the most important and efficient way in communicating information because this medium enables to see the visuals of a particular scenario. Television, is also considered to be a reliable source of communication because it has to report with the visuals. For example, most of the organizations who engages in food and beverage business uses television and radio to advertise their products due to it’s influential power on human purchasing behavior.
Apart from that, cinemas, theatres and comic can be used to inculcate messages in people’s mind. These kind of mediums can only cater to a selective segment of people, because only less number of people used to visit cinemas. Comics can be used to convey strong messages in a smooth way.
In conclusion, it is recommended to use television and radio in communication either to make awareness or to distribute information among general public, irrespective of the cost involved in advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
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Message: Consider replacing "in a smooth way" with adverb for "smooth"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ness or to distribute information among general public, irrespective of the cost involved in a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve of the cost involved in advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29938271605 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08207564656 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8039312277 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189111964098 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590556720921 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306380330922 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933722213803 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345884318899 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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