Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although, it is sometimes believed that university degree could easily help to obtain a job, others opined that more preference should be given to experience and development of soft skills. In my opinion, I consider that having basic post secondary education from university would benefit more in securing a good job.
On the one hand, university graduates have knowledge of fundamentals related with their subject matter. In simple words, it means that they are technically sound, and have in-depth knowledge from basic to advance levels about their stream. Therefore, having relevant degree qualifications would help them to secure a good job with higher designations, and they could also be trained quickly as compared to the non-technical recruiters. A farmer working in his fields, for instance, have many years experience about tilling their fields but he would be unable to produce high yielding varieties by manipulating genes of a plant which only can be done with the help of an agricultural graduate.
On the other hand, in order to be successful at work place, employees should have experience and soft skills. By having these qualities, they would be capable to handle the things and difficult situations in an effective way. However, there could be some issues of understanding the advanced terminology related with the work, if they are academically weak. Sometimes, these things could be overlooked for the workers whose work is perfect and productive for growth of organisation. Thus experience and soft skills may be considered as secondary requirement as certification would be primary one.
In conclusion, experienced worker with no academic certifications is an important asset for a company, but if an organisation has to achieve a remarkable position then it must have a team of qualified and certified employees with advanced knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dle the things and difficult situations in an effective way. However, there could be some issues of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36054421769 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05167823697 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1868970358 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173717505396 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751762132431 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656656783952 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11427260368 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923864214594 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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