Computers are the most marvelous inventions in modern era. Our daily lives are being shaped up computers in numerous ways.I certainly agree in this statement that computers have made a better place to live. I will place two major reasons from two sectors such as Business and Biotechnology to support my statement.
Firstly, the inventions of computers have a deep impact in the commercial activities in almost of the businesses in the world. The power of computers are helping us to execute business activities in more faster ways than last decades.Now, we can provide services to millions of customers in the blink of eyes and this ability is helping Businesses to earn Billions of Dollars in revenues.For this reason, high tech businesses can provide more salaries to it's employees and this has led their employees to enjoy more convenient lifestyles.
Another major breakthrough is seen in Biotechnology, that is , health care is more convenient for us. Moreover, computers are helping scientists to develop cures for some critical diseases, which were considered as incurable on last centuries. For example, life expectancies of people are increasing due to the result of proper diagnosis and right medicines, which are the byproducts of computers. Another notable example is the development of Vaccines in a very short time when a disease like Bird Flu was nearly spreading like epidemic.
In summary, it is not possible to list down all beneficial usages of computers. So, it is definitely agreeable that computers have made our world a better place to live. Since, computers are Human invention so it depends on human beings to utilize the power of technology in our daily live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16363636364 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91992121959 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.5576237094 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228460173811 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887217058252 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10914216176 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146170372534 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111673810968 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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