The ever-changing world is changing our behavior in several ways, Materialism and consumerism are one of the few effects on our lives. But, the overall effect has a positive and negative impact on the human lives. We can dissect this effect in both ways.
Let us look at this effect from the Optimistic point of view. Due to the continuous development of science and technology, people can have a more deeper understanding of the comfort so we are more interested to acquire the things that will make our daily lives for easier or comfortable.For example, now we have the technology for controlling the temperature inside our houses and this has turned into a necessity, but when we spend extra money in making this system for luxurious then it will be extravagant.Therefore, this human nature is leading us to possess consumerism in our daily activities. And ultimate result is materialism in society is winning more rewards.
On the other hand, when we are deeply engaged in valuing the possessions of luxury things or making our lives for comfortable, we are giving less time in maintaining relationships with our closed ones. In some cases, we may devalue the things that are more related to spiritual well beings. For example, when we want to build a luxurious house, we need to spend huge money on this, therefore, we may ignore to fulfill some of the needs of our family members. Hence, our affection for consumerism may destruct some of the important social foundations and may increase unrest in society.
In conclusion, we can sum up the though Materialism and Consumerism will be rising in coming future, but, we need to be very cautious about their impact. So, we need to carefully choose our daily actions so that we can take benefit our these trends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
...ience and technology, people can have a more deeper understanding of the comfort so we are ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...r daily lives for easier or comfortable.For example, now we have the technology for...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...r luxurious then it will be extravagant.Therefore, this human nature is leading us to pos...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...is, therefore, we may ignore to fulfill some of the needs of our family members. Hence, our...
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Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... affection for consumerism may destruct some of the important social foundations and may in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89368770764 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93991214319 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544850498339 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.413892521 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111898984788 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627378994342 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616464609503 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888737717893 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643214324773 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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