Discuss effect of Materialism and Consumerism in the individuals and society
It is common knowledge that we live in a consumerist world whereby people lie to own and consume. This habit of buying without reason is causing many problems for both individuals and society. The following paragraphs will discuss this this in further details and provide a reasoned conclusion.
Consumerism is one of the strongest forces affecting our lives in the modern day world. It does not simply driven with advertising, but it also contributed by idea in our society that to be happier, better and more successful people will have to project their status with expensive products. For instance, wearing a luxury brand of Rolex or Omega wristwatch is believe to exhibit a person’s status symbol. Thus, people tend to associate happiness for false material needs over functional needs.
Admittedly, this trend is leading to massive personal and social problems. People tend to stretch beyond their earning capacity for false prestige, thus, they lose focus on priority spending. Furthermore, due to peer pressure in school parents tend to buy specific product to fulfil child’s demand. This often results in spending for momentary happiness instead real value of the product. As a result of that, an unwanted psychological pressure and stress may create among parents to manage funds or find means to earn more.
In conclusion, society and the world we live in is sufferings at the hands of materialism and consumerism, in example, rise in corruption levels for increasing needs, stress to excel and earn more to spend. In my opinion, an understanding of the need for real value spending can negate some of these rising social problems and bring healthy balance in both individual’s life and society as whole.
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also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19642857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86176189129 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639285714286 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7241468803 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124770893437 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351315925256 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037324595504 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722455803647 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474263731574 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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