Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is positive or negative development ?
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is positive or negative development ?
Nowadays most products are available in every country around the world due to globalization. While this has standardized qualities of consumer goods, it has also reduced the novelty a region has to offer from its locally produced goods. This is a negative trend and in this essay, I will state the reasons for my view.
The most compelling reason for my view is the loss of cultural identity and taste of the people that occur due to standardization. Every country has a unique culture that is reflected in the products that are produced using locally sourced materials. However, when goods are mass produced, the focus is not on preserving the intrinsic attributes of the materials but on adjusting the experience that suits to a large number of consumers. In this process , the qualities that make the products stand out due its orgin are lost. As a result, many people to have adjust their tastes and the product quality is compromised too.
Another reason for my view is that consumers may have to pay higher prices at the same time there are less choices of products available in market. Multi-national companies expand their businesses in new markets taking advantage of the economies of scale; giving competion to the small companies that eventually cease their operations. Market penetrate of such products is follwed by increase the price due to lack of competion. As a result, eventually the consumer have to pay a higher price for the product, with limited options to choose from.
In conclusion, the availability of mass produced goods everywhere has caused many local business to cease due to competition; consumers not only have pay more but also adjust their tastes. As many countries are loosing their distinctive attributes due to use of mass produce goods from elsewhere. It is imperative to maintain the variety and eccentric qualities that make the countries stand out from one another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04610951009 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77296991623 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521613832853 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4633384805 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298952855858 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10743495444 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172129449531 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247472347883 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2499197054 0.056905535591 439% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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