Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in house compared with living in an apartment.
Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in house compared with living in an apartment.
Nowadays, many families choose to live in town houses or condominiums compared to the landed properties. While owning a big house has been a traditional choice for many, the apartments are increasingly attracting busy individuals due to their convenient life style features.
The most compelling argument to own a house is that; houses are spacious and provide complete autonomy to the owner to build the living spaces as they wish. The owners are free to use their own imagination and preferences for designing layouts and interiors to match their tastes. Furthermore, the availability of space enables creation of gardens or landscapes that are aesthetically pleasing to the eye and bring people close to nature. Due to such distinctive attributes, living in a house is more comfortable compared to a space constrained apartment.
While there some clear benefits of living in house, there are also some drawbacks which are worth considering. Despite of their small size compared to houses, apartments offer plethora of shared facilities like playgrounds, swimming pools, car parks and gyms. Availing such shared facilities enable the apartment residents to live an active lifestyle at fraction of the cost. Additionally, those individuals living in a house need to dedicate their own personal time for the maintenance and up keep of the landed properties. While apartment living takes away such hassles by offering convenient maintenance services that gives more personal time for the residents.
In conclusion, despite of the flexibility & comfort, living in house is getting archaic. As it is increasingly common these days for people to lead a busy life, living in an apartment could be better choice for those who prefer an active lifestyle or intend to maximize their time available for leisure activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... creation of gardens or landscapes that are aesthetically pleasing to the eye and bring people close to na...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... drawbacks which are worth considering. Despite of their small size compared to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30340557276 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96363643324 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523219814241 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5298208896 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548219261188 0.244688304435 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229311452916 0.084324248473 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.260223605394 0.0667982634062 390% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368890251154 0.151304729494 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.316918904946 0.056905535591 557% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.