Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind ,such as reading and doing work puzzles .Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
while some people enjoy books and solving crosswords in their free time, others hold the view that it is best not to engage the mind in any activity, in order give it a good rest. In my opinion, developing a hobby could be more effective to make use of the spare time as it can simulate the brain and enable its development.
there are several reasons why people like to engage into various activities during their leisure time. The main one is that such activities can help to divert attention from thoughts that cause stress, for instance pressure from the deadlines at work. In addition, hobbies like reading can increase ones knowledge on various topics and solving puzzles can improve logical thinking abilities. As a result, engaging in such activities not only nutures mind but also increases the individual's creativity. therefore, such benefits justify doing certain activities in free time.
On the other hand, there are people who prefer to stay at home and spend their time either sleeping, or meditating in order to give complete rest to their brian. they belive that the mind would get adequeate rest if they are not doing anything. Such a behaviour could be due to post conditions of activties where one is involved in work that go beyond ones physical and mental capabilities. For example, after driving continously for 8 hours, one would need to rest as he or she may have lost the ability to concentrate. it is quite common for most individuals to encounter such situations, where doing nothing seems to be the best choice to rejenuvate the mind.
In conclusion, while both views are commonly held in the society, there is age old saying that "idle mind is devil's workshop"; it does not necessarily mean that doing nothing will give good rest to the brain. therefore, it is recommended that individuals engage them selves in thought simulating activities that releases stress and develops the brain in order maximise the benefit of the available time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96407185629 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65459306771 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3685490342 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350481362168 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109324178319 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055706927356 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195881518094 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446772050621 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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