Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, advertising has the power to sell anything, irrespective of how useful the product is in reality. I completely agree with this statement and in this essay, I will state the reasons for my view.
The most compelling reason for my view is that, display of commercials has proliferated everywhere. For instance, television programs, billboards, magazines, public spaces, radio shows are full of commercials that garb our attention and engage us through variety of medium. Additionally, such advertisements try to repetitively influence our thoughts with notion of particular product being useful and available at fair price and everyone in society using them. Consequently, people start believing the commercials and buy products due to constant brain-washing.
Another reason for modern advertising to be successful is could be due to use of cinematics and dramatization that appeals the emotions of the consumers. For example, advertising of baby diapers presenting a smiling cute baby and a caring mother. Commercials tend to project the models and actors using their products as the ideal version of what people aspire to be. To illustrate, an advertisement promoting a deodorant that attracts women. As a result, people buy those products because advertisement can convince people that using their product would enable them to achieve their desired social status, regardless of any other factors.
In conclusion, I completely agree that modern day advertising is used by companies to target psychological needs of consumers and not the real need of society. It is recommended, that everyone should be cognizant about practicality and utility of the products and not get influenced by false advertisement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52272727273 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22277927328 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5962257099 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994094049685 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384665521588 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501197674213 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721805902987 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414014104241 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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