you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.•How important the licence is to you•Asking how he/she found it•Saying how you would love to thank him/her.-Work and proof of identity-Where you found

Essay topics:

you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
• How important the licence is to you
• Asking how he/she found it
• Saying how you would love to thank him/her.
- Work and proof of identity
- Where you found it
- Take you out for dinner

Hello Mr. Raymond,

I am vikram Ja the holder of license which you returned via post recently.I am writing you to thank you for sending me the lost drivers licence.

I am delighted to get it back and I am able to drive again, I was quite worried since it went missing last week. As my mother is taking arthritis treatment, I have to drive her to clinic almost every day; and without the license it was tough for me to take public transport to the clinic. Besides that, I am habitual to driving a car to commute to work everyday.

May I check with you where did you found the licence, as I suspect , I lost it near the gas station while I stopped my car for refueling. Perhaps, I should be more careful with my wallet.

Nevertheless, I would like to thank you and take this opportunity to host a dinner for you and meet you in person. it would be great if you can share your availability next week and a prefered time and location where we can meet. I would love to drive you back home after dinner.

thank you once again and appreciate your help. Please let me know if I can bear the expenses for the delivery. Looking forward to meet you in person.

yours sincerely,
vikram

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Mr. Raymond, I am vikram Ja the holder of license wh...
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Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Mr. Raymond, I am vikram Ja the holder of license which yo...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...se which you returned via post recently.I am writing you to thank you for sending...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sending me the lost drivers licence. I am delighted to get it back and I am ab...
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Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et it back and I am able to drive again, I was quite worried since it went missin...
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Line 6, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thout the license it was tough for me to take public transport to the clinic. Bes...
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Line 6, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c transport to the clinic. Besides that, I am habitual to driving a car to commut...
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Line 6, column 358, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ual to driving a car to commute to work everyday. May I check with you where did yo...
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Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work everyday. May I check with you where did you found the licence, as I su...
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Line 8, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... did you found the licence, as I suspect , I lost it near the gas station while I ...
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Line 8, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should be more careful with my wallet. Nevertheless, I would like to thank you ...
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Line 10, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... dinner for you and meet you in person. it would be great if you can share your av...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
...to drive you back home after dinner. thank you once again and appreciate your hel...
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Line 12, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fter dinner. thank you once again and appreciate your help. Please let me know...
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Line 12, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... know if I can bear the expenses for the delivery. Looking forward to meet you i...
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Line 12, column 131, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...ses for the delivery. Looking forward to meet you in person. yours sincerely, ...
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Line 12, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Looking forward to meet you in person. yours sincerely, vikram
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ing forward to meet you in person. yours sincerely, vikram
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Line 14, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eet you in person. yours sincerely, vikram
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36322869955 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39445159431 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7413169327 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8461538462 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34218152521 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125205792496 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101232618716 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162126897175 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107972007051 0.0580467560999 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.