As Countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes
Why does this happen?
How does it affect society?
Many countries around the world have significant growth in their economy. Development of the country is contributed by lot of factors. One important factor which accounts to it is population. Lets discuss in this essay on how development of country contributes to family size and the effect in society.
Family were bigger in size during past generation. However, we can see nuclear family these days. It is because of the cost of living in developed nations. The cost of education, medical expenses and basic need is increased to ten times when compares to 20 years back. This makes people to really think whether they need more kids? nowadays, we see working parents in most of the case, therefore they tend to have small family. On several occasion we can see people miss fun due to lesser members in their family.
Society is not greatly affected with smaller family in country like India and China, whereas countries like Canada have very low population. Canada is offering funding to child development since they have a lesser people. This helps people to have bigger family. Although, the funding is given still some people feel to have small family to have good attention. Society will not get directly impacted unless the population is really low. By doing other activities like technology advancement people can contribute to growth.
To conclude, family size is not a dominating factor for enhancement of country. There are lot of factors which contribute to economy. Hence family size will not play a major role in advancement of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59397034882 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7618153616 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.1 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251995668303 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717908318885 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663883270445 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150275861143 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651003063107 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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