Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There exists an assertion that due to the development in technology, it is much easier to catch criminals or even eradicate violence. And crime rates will inevitably plummet as a result. I, for one, agree with the given statement on the basis of some compelling reasons.
To begin with, lack of technology simply means that there would be more chances for criminals to appear. First and foremost, every person can be traced readily today. Keeping the public under surveillance regarding every fishy movement on the streets, these outnumbered cameras which have been installed across the cities act as a perfect tool for crime prevention. That is, if they did not exist, there would be a surge in crime rates. Secondly, on the contrary to the past when only we had human policemen, now we can capitalize on online firewall systems controlled by both online police technicians and artificial intelligence to track down would-be offenders.
Additionally, although there might be this belief that new means of crime commitment would be available as technology improves, I, however, think that fewer criminals would take this risk. As a matter of fact, the more technology gets better, the harder it becomes for breaking the laws per se. Therefore, I think even if some acts of crime might happen, the procedure to detect the culprits would not be a big conundrum thanks to advanced systems. Thus, crime rates could dwindle away as technology grows.
In conclusion, despite the fact that there have always been some offenders of any kind, crime rates could diminish gradually in the light of cutting-edge technologies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10943396226 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73021932152 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7971580254 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192659033435 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762818778821 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694952539009 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118138424145 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462912173704 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.