You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, . And that you want your money back. Things to include:
- facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened.
- Politeness know one responds to insults.
- Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen?
- Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.
To the manager,
I am writing to express my absolute dissatisfaction with the hospitality and poor manner of the staff at your restaurant.
The reason I chose your restaurant over the others was the fact that there were amazing reviews. However, our experience was totally the opposite. To begin with I had booked a full table of six people on your website two months in advance. The night be arrived, we soon realized that our table had been given to others without even informing us. Since we have been punctual, this phenomenon was totally and unexpected. However, we try to talk to the person who was responsible but he would not listen and we failed to convince him at last. Therefore, we had no other choice to take the seats in two separate tables which was not what we had intended to do.
In addition to this, the food that we desired to order on the menu was not available at the time, so that we were forced to opt for something that was not our favorite.
I would request to make a full refund due to your disability in providing what we had reserved at your restaurant.
Regards,
Paul Hollywood
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, as to, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60696517413 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58412577043 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1880947222 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119683287474 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498990974426 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282709000498 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707899835429 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028605721653 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.