differences between countries become less evident each year.nowdays ,all over the world people share the same fashions,advertising,brands,eating habits and TV channels.do the advantages outweigh the disavantages of this?
it is undoubtedly the case that the world today has become global village.one of the effects of this is that increasingly people in all corners of the world are exposed to similar servieces and product and adopt similar habits.my view is that this is largely a beneficial process and in this essay i will explain why.
The first point to make is that there are some downsides to this process of cultural globalisation,but these are relatively minor.The most signifacant of these disadvantages is that it can weaken national culture and traditions.For example,if people wathch films and television programmes produced in the United States,sometimes they adopt aspects of the lifestyle of the American characters they see on television.Typically,however,this only affects minor details such as clothing and does not seriously threaten national idenity.
when we turn to the other side of the argument,there are two major points to make in favour of this process.the first of these is that the more we share habits,products and services,the better we understand each other and this reduces prejudice against other nations.The other point relates to modernity.It is a sign of progress in a society that people no longer are restricted to brands and advertisements from their own society but are able to access more international goods.If,for example there were unable to drink coca cola ,then that would mean their society was not part of the international community.
In conclusion,I understand the point of view of people who worry about cultural globalisation because it is a threat to national traditions.However,this is outweighed by its positive impact on international understanding and the fact that it represents progress within a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40293040293 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78273548344 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.045528311 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 368.75 106.682146367 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.25 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100908183715 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631450316922 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456994115778 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631450316922 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456994115778 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 13.0946893788 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.29 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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