Many people try to look younger than their ago.what are the reasons people do this do you think this is a good thing or bad thing
As a human being, young age are or be younger is most beautiful phase of life.People always try to become young by heart or through physical outlook.However,it takes lots of efforts to maintain young look.MAny people are more conscious about their outword appearance.It creates positive and negative effects.In this essay,I will describe why people like to be young always and it's side-effects.
There are many reasons why people admire young looks.Firstly ,young means people want to become beautiful and physically fit.Beauty always gets appreciation.Its human nature,they like praises for getting appriciate.People do many things such as use make up to look young follow youth fashion.Secondly, sometimes some profession has to demand only young person such field are modelling, airhostess, media and person who work in filmline.This all fields give high scale salary and it's attract people.some people also would done plastic surgery to maintain or update their look.Finally,by feeling young,it brings self-esteem and confidence into the person and they can do great work in their respective field.
To maintain young look, people do many things which brings lots of sadness.People use access amount of make up which is danger for skin.its worst effect is skin cancer because of chemicals. Furthermore, people follow strict diet and exercise to fit their body,it brings lots of health issue and people loose their original beauty.Also people spend more money in makeup and diet food. People get happy till than their beauty and fitness for example,one famous model of China did plastic surgery and adopt diet to become young but it surgery gone wrong and she loose her natural beauty and looked like skeleton.
To conclude, people should accept whatever they are.Be natural is one of the finest praise for human being.Be beautiful and young by heart not by outword appreance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36148648649 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90882694509 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.799736415 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.5 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264395341795 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13614994109 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543604899786 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154358942429 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672768215116 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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