Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give our opinion
I am convinced that having disciplined children is the need our developing society. While some people believe that disciplining kids should be parent’s responsibility, others argue that school should be responsible for developing social and ethical behaviour. In my opinion, parents have a major role in disciplining kids than teachers
On one hand, some people believe that parents have an upper hand in moulding children from birth till they are adolescents and I agree. This is because children have a great observation power and learn from parents by motoring (scrutinizing) their traits. For instance, research by catalyst and other researchers have shown conclusively that there is more than 40 percent of similarity between parents and children perspective towards world and behaviour. To solve the issues with discipline, parents should act as role models and set some ground rules by spending quality time with children. Hence, this allows children to absorb conventions and code of conduct which they will follow themselves.
On the other hand, others feel that teachers are the first contact of pupil with the outside world and they are responsible for imbibing social understanding and inculcating good ethics in children. Thus, teachers should not put emphasis on academics; rather objective should be on cultivating creativity, ethical perspectives, well-socialised behaviour and correct judgmental foundation. As a result, children will learn the significance of respect and having a good rapport with other children. However, this could only be possible by the active involvement of educational instructors in a student’s life which is highly likely to be more than forty percent because of high number of students in a class.
To conclude, although teachers are the main point of contact of students with outside world but their participation in the student life is limited, whereas, parents are the constant support hence they are responsible for maintaining behaviour and inspire them to be disciplined.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52564102564 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04980032974 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7262031922 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175028171822 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703906657841 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628056732458 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119250609796 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908538755268 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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