Parents play a major role in the well being and overall development of a child. However, the most vital is the role of a teacher and guide. Many consider parents to be the first teachers of a child. While some are of a different school of thought, in my opinion, parents are the closest to the children and hence, aware of whats beneficial for their offspring. This essay will argue that parents are indeed the best teachers
To begin with, along with receiving a lot of parental advice, parents have their own life experiences and little by little, try to impart good values and responsibility. Moreover, they use the means and techniques, best suited for their child to discipline them. For instance, when I was young, my parents encouraged me to read more rather than spending time watching television consequently making me a voracious reader. Developing good habits at an early age becomes a part of our adulthood and carves a path for a better future.
Secondly, many children try to imitate and are in awe of their parents, namely toddlers. Even if they are not exposed to the outside world, infants replicate their traits and learn the most from parents. Therefore, children continuously observe their parents and try to shadow their behavior and language.To cite an example, young girls love dressing according to their mothers, while young boys pick up skills from their fathers.
To reiterate, since parents are constantly around children rely on them for guidance. Parents may not be able to provide us with a formal education, however the the lessons learnt from them are invaluable and by far cannot be taught by any teacher in any school. Will a child outgrow their parents teachings? That's entirely circumstantial, but their teaching will always form a base of their personality!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97682119205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68907812791 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5122788822 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901325899507 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328249077602 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336308289668 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591622392037 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040367034136 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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