Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A university education is necessary for success in today’s world. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Many people believe that higher education through Universities is pivotal to a successful career. Yes, I do strongly agree to this fact, as with knowledge comes great wisdom and Academic as well as technical skills can act as great assets to opening wider job prospects and higher pay scales.
Firstly, we all would agree that education helps us improve our thinking and expressing capabilities, enhances our intellectual and emotional qualities. It helps us grow and perform better, improves our performance in our desired career streams. For example a Contractor may know how to construct a building or a house, but an Architect or an Engineer with their training can design structures in a more creative way with great sense of aesthetics , material choices as well as provide economic solutions.
Secondly, University education introduces us to our peers, provides a competition, keeps us on toes and drags us to be more competitive to be able to cope up with the educated populace.It helps us gain confidence to face the society, keeps us in touch with the global developments, enhances our minds keeping in pace with the day to day technological advances, new software applications to products available in market. University education also introduces us with the challenges faced in our streams and helps us find innovative solutions to resolve them. Again considering the example of the Contractor who has learnt his skills from field experience may not be able to construct structures of complex nature. Whilst an Architect or a skilled engineer with their immense knowledge, communication skills, exposure with technology and experience can guide the contractor to build any type of structures.
To conclude, I would say University Education is vital to today’s world, and helps develop our personalities, provides better career prospects, higher remuneration probabilities. It also helps develop our analytical as well as reasoning skills that may be required in our daily lives to make any tough decisions or future growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34984520124 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08857332274 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.7622380441 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.090909091 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153254407412 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630663161368 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381975654439 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968625094834 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138794066512 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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