University students always focus on one specific subject, but some people think that universities should encourage their students to study a wide range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most Universities allow students to apply for their chosen streams of study, while few universities believe that students should give equal importance to varied subjects and take further education in them along with their majors. I partly disagree to this belief, that students be forced to take additional subjects beyond their fields of interest. According to me this will be too much overstressing for the students and will impact their performance. I would hereby, clarify both the point of views with proper reasoning.
Firstly, We cannot deny the fact that education gives us wisdom, the wider the range, the better the person. They can gain more confidence, interactive skills, helping them get better job prospects and a better placement in the competitive world. A higher skill set level with varied subjects, can help them keep pace with the fast moving technological advancements too. It surely will help them grow intellectually, emotionally as well as helps them stay socially connected with the surrounding world.
Having said this, we also need to understand that graduation is not an easy task. It needs a lot of concentration, analytical, reasoning skills with great grasping capabilities. If a student is forced to take subject, in addition to the main subject of specialization, they may get overburdened, and will lose interest due deviation of attention. For example, a Medical student being asked to take subjects related to creative streams like drawing or some language learning. The student, having no interest in the subject may not be able to concentrate and perform even in the primary subjects.
To conclude, forcing students to take varied subjects not related to their majors, that they are graduating in, would lead to mere distraction and a waste of talent and energy. Students should be able to make choices of their subjects based on their individual preferences and ultimate goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...bjects beyond their fields of interest. According to me this will be too much overstressing for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27597402597 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89896159458 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.497907591 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280171318331 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968783322494 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102128294018 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186302814423 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114067407156 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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