Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.”
Our life has a great revolution since the advent of Cars. Although cars have many advantages, they have some disadvantages which should be considered. They can increase air pollution and cause some serious traffic problems in big cities. Governments should plan solutions to prevent using cars. I believe using cars will be decreased in the near future. I will explore more about the reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, air pollution and living costs are a hot problem in new societies. Without a doubt, cars have a significant effect on air pollution which raises several concerns about some problems like global warming and reducing using of cars can be a solution to prevent more contamination. The states should encourage people to avoid using their cars and provide their citizens with more facilities for transporting. By giving more information about the importance of such problems caused by using cars people will get more awareness about their role in their society. Furthermore, living costs are much more than any time before, and people’s priority is changed. They prefer to spend their money wisely or save it for their children’s future instead of buying a car. I can imagine a future in which people are aware of the care of their environments and put their money aside for other important things because transportation systems are more convenient than cars.
Secondly, in big cities, traffic issues become a crucial topic and governments should find a brilliant way to avoid it. A vast number of cars in the metropolises has an impact on everybody’s life. People in big cities usually struggle with traffics and parking areas which can waste their time and money. For instance, in the capital city of Iran, huge traffic forces people to leave their home two or even three hours sooner to go their work because at morning and other rush hours people face with an ocean of cars on the roads and streets. People who used to drive their own car in such crowded cities where there are traffic jams all the time prefer to use public transportation because it helps them to save their time. By using public transportation, they do not worry about finding a parking area which might take much time sometimes. In addition, governments should try to keep public costs of transportation as low as possible and increase cars and roads tax they also should motivate people to use taxis and buses instead. As a result, people find their benefits to use of public transportation sooner or later.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that using cars will be decreased in the next twenty years. I feel this way because people get more awareness and try to be environmentally friendly by using their cars less and because other problems like traffic issues can convince people to use public transportation more.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 475.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98105263158 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75160874626 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486315789474 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8148283444 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.869565217 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.652173913 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181964786099 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674968650112 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512345420247 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131351503272 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020320283553 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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