Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Protecting the Environment is the responsibility of the government. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Corporations are crucial for economy and often late its been observed that govt cannot defy multinational companies. Hence corporations and organizations are crucial in preservation of nature.
Environment plays a crucial role in evolution of humankind. While some argue that the government is obligated to protect it, I disagree with this statement. In this essay I will discuss why awareness among citizens is crucial in conserving the nature and also the role of corporations and nonprofit organizations to combat the effects of climate change.
There is ample evidence indicating that role of multinational companies is vital in up keeping the living world. The central reason for this is twofold, primarily, industries are second largest contributor to the pollution of nature. Containing the waste along with prevention of toxic gases into the atmosphere will slow down the process of deterioration. Secondly, communities should actively participate in preserving the environment. As government is pre occupied in looking after the welfare of the people and country, NGO’s and communities should come forward and act against the destruction of nature as they have proven effective in the past. To cite an example, a petition carried out by a activist group in Paris against the rape of women had a brilliant reach across the world and bought the percentage of rape in France by 2%. Therefore it is conclusively clear that the fight against environment destruction seek stronger ally in corporations and activist groups.
Eventually, despite the laws laid out by the administration it all comes down to people and their mindset towards the nature that determine the way forward. The onus is on citizens to be aware of the catastrophic effects on nature as their consumption of goods or services has significant impact on the environment. It is pivotal that they are mindful of the ways to save the habitat. For instance, sustainable living has to be followed with emphasis of recycling, reusing and reduction of materials that possibly can have adverse effect on environment. Thus it is possible to state that individuals are the deciding factor in safe guarding the environment.
To sum up, although government regulates the policies to conserve the nature, I believe that the responsibility in safekeeping the nature has to be shared by the citizens, corporations and various communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33157894737 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14885108538 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5873465908 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.555555556 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958676931748 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288547742346 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512719128013 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515081003801 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413523406268 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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