Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native re-gions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Many factors comprise to the success of an individual. Some people argue that the region one hails from has a detrimental effect on a person who is successful, I agree to this statement. In this essay, I will discuss how regions tend to mold the thought process of someone who comes from it and changes that a district could undergo from the achievements of a local boy with relevant examples.
To begin with, opinions and ideas are shaped by the surroundings that include the people and society one lives in. It has been observed that people from rural background usually have a conservative thinking when compared to urban population. Similarly, the struggle in such regions or luxury of cities provide opportunity to individuals either to streamline a incompetent process or create something which can better the lives of citizens. For in-stance, Abraham Lincoln owes his success to his community as the difficulties facd by them motivated him to participate in politics and eventually become the President of the United States. Therefore it is conclusively clear that local regions play an important role in shaping an individual consequently leading to success in life.
Secondly, the region also benefits in turn when some one does better in life. Attained success and fame attracts attention on the history of an individual and puts home region on the map. An opinion voiced out by a celebrity or famous personality will have a greater reach and greater probability of many acting on it. To illustrate this, a report from The national statistical and census Committee states that 80% of voters would prefer a local individual who is widely recognized than a politician from a national party. Thus we can state that a local individual is considered as one of their own and have higher impact on resolving the issues.
To conclude, I believe that domestic province that one grows up in is crucial in the triumph of an individual and there is lot betterment that a community can benefit with their success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9821958457 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84902940296 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7601893294 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.928571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168454612969 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615899516991 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422187574315 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983086113174 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447615967729 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.