You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Admin-istration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have re-cently seen on the university's notice board.
Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and
• Give your reason for writing
• Tell about your education
• Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing this letter in regards to a vacancy advertised.
As the advertisement on the university’s notice board is not very detailed, I have few queries regarding the eligibility criteria for the post of Quality Assurance Manager.
I am a mechanical engineer currently pursuing my Masters in business Administration at Loren Brusque University. I am in my last semester of the course and awaiting a placement from the university.
Prior to my admission into the university, I was associated with Hyundai for 2 years as a Quality Analyst. During my tenure, I was a part of a team which has launched the super successful mod-el of Hyundai. The model was awarded as the most safest car of the year by The international Automobile association. I have also taken Business Operations as my major in my post gradua-tion. With my ecperience and education in the field of quality and operations, I feel I could add a new dimension to the role of QAM.
Your response will be much appreciated in this regard. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mihira
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ear Sir/Madam, I’m writing this letter in regards to a vacancy advertised. As the advertise...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y Assurance Manager. I am a mechanical engineer currently pursuing my Masters ...
^^
Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e Manager. I am a mechanical engineer currently pursuing my Masters in busines...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'safest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: safest
...f Hyundai. The model was awarded as the most safest car of the year by The international Au...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the safest'.
Suggestion: most the safest
...f Hyundai. The model was awarded as the most safest car of the year by The international Au...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0218579235 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19573568477 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5666810717 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5833333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17931153044 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575818170547 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578485875031 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982544434343 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582577943473 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.