In some countries police officers do not carry guns. How does this affect the manner they implement law and order? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a gun. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In few countries the law enforcement officials do not hold any firearms. Although there will not be much impact in discharging their duties every day, possessing a gun will infuse a sense of authority and I support it. This essay will discuss how it enables the officials to face any circumstances along with the negative effects of having a weapon citing examples to support the points.
On the one hand, having a pistol as part of the uniform will ensure that police executives are equipped to tackle any situation. In the rise of criminal rate across the globe, it makes sense to authorize the law enforcers to counter anti-social activities including use of weapon when necessary, to illustrate this, the murder rate during broad day light have increased exponentially in past 5 years underlining the need of a gun for the patrolling officers in shielding the citizens. In addition to this, it also aids in defending oneself from forces if any unwanted situation is ought to arise. Therefore it is conclusively clear that in the light of rising criminal activities it is pivotal for a policeman to possess a sidearm in safeguarding the community and self.
Although there is a case for better tackling of a serious crime, the possible abuse of power cannot be understated. There exist a small proportion of bureaucrats who do not understand that with great power come great responsibility leading to misuse of one’s capacity. This will break the trust that citizens have on the system and also force people to revolt against it. To cite an example, a recent incident of a false encounter of a colored national in the USA by a white officer led to protests across the nation forcing the government to take action on the official and also apologizing to the family. Furthermore, it also intimidates kids and females to approach the officers of law keepers with their grievances. Thus it is possible to state that few sections of society prefer a weaponless officers patrolling their streets.
To sum up, in my opinion despite wrong use of authority by few individuals, it is utmost necessity for policemen to be sanctioned a revolver at a minimum to battle ever increasing crimes in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88810653934 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8368746104 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155957998837 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487450822304 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399825057011 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872227238802 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558150482567 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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