Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The world is now divided into rural and urban areas. Some argue that living in big cities have negative impact on health, I second this thought. This essay will discuss how pollution and busy lifestyle in developed areas take a toil on one’s well being along with relevant examples to support my points.
To begin with, there is ample evidence that the air circulating in cities is unbreathable leading to various respiratory infections and heart strokes in extreme cases. The central reason for this is, increase of pollution levels in air. This is primarily due to rapid industrialization leading to industries running from residential areas as well as deforestation. To illustrate this, an Oxford University report suggests that, top 50 metropolis comprise 40% of all respiratory problems across the globe underlining the necessity of breathing pure air. Therefore it is conclusively clear that technically advanced areas have lower oxygen levels in air resulting in numerous health problems.
Secondly, the consumption of unhealthy food is higher in urban areas. Due to busy lifestyle, people get addicted to processed food leading to deficiency of nutrients required. In addition to this, the vegetables and fruits are not organically grown. The storing of them in frozen state depletes the proteins they carry leading to food poisoning and various cardiovascular diseases . For example, a recent survey by the WHO outlines that convenience food contributes to 80% of obesity and heart diseases. Thus it is possible to state that being actively occupied at work whilst residing in municipalities leads to bad diet and consequently exposing to fatal disorders.
In conclusion, despite accessible to better infrastructure, living in concrete jungles make citizens prone to various health issues due to high carbon dioxide levels in atmosphere and un availability of fresh food.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 435, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'metropolis' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'metropolises'.
Suggestion: metropolises
...University report suggests that, top 50 metropolis comprise 40% of all respiratory problem...
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Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ng the necessity of breathing pure air. Therefore it is conclusively clear that technical...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 691, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... resulting in numerous health problems. Secondly, the consumption of unhealthy f...
^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ning and various cardiovascular diseases . For example, a recent survey by the WHO...
^^
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s to 80% of obesity and heart diseases. Thus it is possible to state that being acti...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41836734694 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03146384668 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659863945578 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4667144906 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108314080291 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333925326366 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519070996538 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611164140273 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239699610603 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 435, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'metropolis' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'metropolises'.
Suggestion: metropolises
...University report suggests that, top 50 metropolis comprise 40% of all respiratory problem...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ng the necessity of breathing pure air. Therefore it is conclusively clear that technical...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 691, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... resulting in numerous health problems. Secondly, the consumption of unhealthy f...
^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ning and various cardiovascular diseases . For example, a recent survey by the WHO...
^^
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s to 80% of obesity and heart diseases. Thus it is possible to state that being acti...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41836734694 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03146384668 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659863945578 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4667144906 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108314080291 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333925326366 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519070996538 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611164140273 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239699610603 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.