Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Todays, due to high technologies and internet our world became global village because of connection between countries and people. So, any events that occur around the world will affect to on our lives. May be some people prefer to do not be aware of about news because they are sometimes upsetting, but I believe that it is important to know what happens around the world.
First of all, the main reason that I think we should know what happens in the world is that we can prepare ourselves much more better for what will going on in the future, and we can make the best decision. All of us know that what happens in the word will influences in our country and our daily lives. For example, there are wars around the word in some countries, and many countries are contributing in these wars. Indeed, these wars will cause currency value in some countries decreases dramatically. So, when people know that what is happening beside them, they immediately try to make decision about their jobs, money and any things that is related to their life. I remember last year we decided to have a trip abroad my country, but we had to change our money six month before our trip because of starting a war in our adjacency. Actually we knew this war would affect to our currency value, so we could change more money for our trip. Therefore, it is necessary to know what is going on in the world to be able to make the best decision.
Secondly, information always helps us to be aware of world news. Actually, this is vital to know what happens in this global village. I mean events always are experiments that we can use them to cease same events in the future that they are occurring today. For instance, a huge earthquake occurred in a country near my country about one month ago and thousands of people died. That was terrible news, but it caused my government decided to set some strong rules for buildings to prevent same event in my country in future. Indeed, my country is on some faults. In my opinion, being informed about world events and news helps us to decide for future and prevent same occurrences.
For summary, I believe that it is important to know what happens around the word, because, it helps us to prepare ourselves better for future, make the best decisions and prevent same bad events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... world will affect to on our lives. May be some people prefer to do not be aware o...
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Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...d is that we can prepare ourselves much more better for what will going on in the future, a...
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Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...urselves much more better for what will going on in the future, and we can make the b...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
...know that what happens in the word will influences in our country and our daily lives. For...
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Line 2, column 771, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...try, but we had to change our money six month before our trip because of starting a w...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ngs to prevent same event in my country in future. Indeed, my country is on some faults. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58111380145 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37720858589 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44794188862 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5782327663 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5789473684 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198094103044 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717534627309 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606223155503 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141081271196 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630423965851 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.