Do you feel it is better for young people leaving school to study further at university or go straight into the workplace?
In this fast-paced cut-throat competition, it has become arduous for people to get reputable jobs. There is a split opinion on whether people ought to start work straight away or get a university degree first. I stand with the latter view because this will give them more opportunities and aid to broaden their horizons.
To commence with, one prominent reason why children must complete their university studies is because it will give them a degree which is considered the bare minimum to land a job. In other words, the competition has ameliorated drastically that people who do not hold a degree will not stand a chance to get a job that pays a handsome salary. To illustrate, if a person wishes to become a doctor, then they must complete MBBS studies, and only then they can work as a doctor.
Another point to consider is that university is known as the citadel of education and it imparts people with the latest norms and the way the world operates. Once the child has completed their degree, they would be ready to take the job head on. Studies also provide vital life lessons in the means of extra-curriculum which helps the student to become mature enough.
Lastly, children who start working as soon as they leave their school only get work in labour force. Although the revenue they earn might be a boon at the beginning, it will stagnate in the longer run and the company also will not provide them with any sort of promotions as the employee lacks the necessary qualification for it. These types of jobs can also put a strain on the body as they require standing for prolong period of time or lift heavy machineries. All these things culminate to perilous ailments which can be hazardous to people's life.
In recapitulation, to stand out from the crowd, people must hold a degree as it will provide them with basic knowledge and prepare them for the real world. I reckon that a person in today's life cannot survive without a university study.
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Suggestion:
...not survive without a university study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, so, then, i reckon, sort of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72674418605 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58732688523 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5684498334 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132078873081 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451214682855 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297966161707 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751490818825 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147663294297 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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