Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health Do you agree with this

Health is wealth; we have been hearing this since we're born. But the question is how to maintain a healthy life style? Doctors! I believe may contribute a great part to provide awareness about how to being healthy. Nevertheless, Government may also help to improve the overall health of people by initiating campaigns related to health.
Indeed doctors are blessing of God, and they don't only cure our disease but may also improve our society by educating people about health improvement. They let their patients know what should they eat and what to avoid, what kind of food increase obesity and what kind of soda drinks damage the teeth. For instance, In Germany, all the senior doctors are responsible to publish their articles in local newspaper to provide knowledge about a happy and healthy life style. Therefore, doctors should encourage their patients to give up bad habits and start moving towards healthy activities.
As far as government is concerned, their importance is nowhere less than doctors in promoting healthy life style. Now governments and other concerned authorities around the world has started some marketing to educate people of how they can save themselves with some deadly diseases such as cancer or ebola etc. As an illustration, China is using all the advertising mediums to provide awareness to their nation regarding cancer, not only people have started avoiding use of can foods but they have also embraced some healthy activities like jogging and workout. This is why, it is impossible to avoid the importance of legal authorities in health sector.
To put into a nutshell, it won't be wrong to state that it is indispensable for patients to consult their doctors regarding their health but the way government is putting their efforts to improve a society in healthy terms should not be overlooked.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08278145695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66448499451 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0671222184 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378156227063 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122796902751 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780593350113 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234977818181 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829805545086 0.056905535591 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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