Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
Do you agree with this?
Over recent years, people have become more cautious about the improvement of their well-being. Due to this, it is said to be the doctors' responsibility to provide an appropriate information to patients about the health and educate them. Are doctors the only source to obtain the expected physical condition’s advice? How the other resources could be utilised if any? A thorough scrutiny of the above will lead to an insightful response.
While it is convenient to adopt one aspect over the other, I prefer to present a balanced ergo objective assessment. In my opinion, physicians must provide some relevant knowledge to ill people about their illnesses. However, there are various knowledgeable sources available which can be as useful as the doctors. The subsequent two paragraphs will detail both aspects extensively.
First and foremost, doctors are the most credible and trustworthy source of relevant data. They have been studying and getting experience since years, therefore, it is quite obvious that doctors will have a tremendous amount of confidence for the cure they propose. Secondly, a proper doctor can analyze various symptoms of deathly diseases and provide medicines for those incurable sicknesses. For instance, Cancer or Tuberculosis victims need to have proper therapy and medications from an experienced person than any blogs available on social media.
On the contrary, internet posses the exorbitant amount(plethora) of data related to any diseases we can think of. Internet contains not only the symptoms but also how the medications reacted to the illnesses and how long it took to get better. Furthermore, doctors charge a fortune for any kind of treatment and education to patients which could be reduced to a particular extent with the help of internet technology. In support of the above, if people are aware of the symptoms they face, it might be easy to get the medicines mentioned on the internet.
Keeping all of the above-mentioned facts in mind, benefits such as advice from an experienced doctor and adequate medication are evident. In contrast, components such as the doctor's tremendous fee and experiences from other patients are well worthy of equivalent consideration. To conclude, as is with most things in life, there are two sides to the matter. Fortunately, in this case, both of these are constructive should be implied moderately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...eing. Due to this, it is said to be the doctors responsibility to provide an appropriat...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s mentioned on the internet. Keeping all of the above-mentioned facts in mind, benefits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31398416887 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01579304542 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1322624194 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9047619048 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0476190476 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27822575253 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679086494994 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708989707813 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139438162223 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816468987606 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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