Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports is great way to change one’s monotonous life and rejuvenate. Extreme sports have Benn in the news lately for the rising popularity in the community, which require one to put his or her life on risk for just fun. Hence, one group of people, who value their lives recommend to put ban on such activities, which is my belief too. On the other hand, who loves these sports are against the idea. This essay will weigh both point of view in terms of risk involved and few benefits which these sports have.
High intensity sports ask one to be at his optimum level for both, physical and mental. Sports, such as, skydiving or para-gliding, demands participant to be healthy as well as mentally sound. But, minute technical issue of non-working parachute or health issue of blood pressure may lead in participant’s casualty. Due to this, one can not undervalue his life and should not take risk.
On the other hand, such sports preparation may eventually transform one’s personality drastically. For example, an introvert person has to participate or get along with other participant and open up himself, which will have great impact on his nature. Or a shy person may gain confidence by participating in such sports, which can boost his morale.
To conclude, it may seem wise for few people to opt for such activities to gain moral boost and confidence, however one should not underestimate how precious one’s life is. In my opinion, these extreme sports activities should be banned, since there is lot on risk, and life can not be put on risk for fun.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend putting'.
Suggestion: recommend putting
... group of people, who value their lives recommend to put ban on such activities, which is my bel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88104089219 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76112348098 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4430427119 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14710620271 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560896315688 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537365413226 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974787036693 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559531846918 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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