Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
In many nations, with the immense progress of supermarkets, many local vendors are facing huge difficulties to sustain. Many people are of the opinion that this (unhealthy competition) will lead to an extinct of small shops and entrepreneurs. While it may be true that the local businesses have come down(succumbed) due to increasing concept of supermarkets, in my opinion they can very well cope with such big markets by working on innovative expansion and adopting unique business strategies.
Supermarkets have risen(mushroomed) tremendously. They are planned in such a beautiful(an alluring,ravishing,stunning,appealing,delightful,smashing) way that the customer is able to fulfil all his daily requirements from one stop. Hence, it lures more customers to visit supermarkets for their purchase rather than spending more time and energy visiting three or four small shops for every other item.for example, Big Bazaar gaining so much popularity these days is exemplary to this fact. In fact, it is over-crowded every weekend.
Local vendors can be in the competition by making some smart changes to their business strategies. If they adhere to the traditional ways of entrepreneurship, their fall is inevitable. They can increase popularity by giving cheaper products as well as providing free home-delivery services. Multiple local vendors can tie up together and function like a supermarket to spread their business reach. A very clear example of this is innovation vegetable sellers who have exploited social media well to expand their network in their local areas.
To conclude, with the rapid growth of supermarket, local entrepreneur does have to take some fresh initiatives to prosper in the business. Any shopkeeper willing to make few changes in the way he does business can survive the threat of supermarkets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ravishing
...e planned in such a beautifulan alluring,ravishing,stunning,appealing,delightful,smashing ...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , appealing
... beautifulan alluring,ravishing,stunning,appealing,delightful,smashing way that the custom...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , smashing
...,ravishing,stunning,appealing,delightful,smashing way that the customer is able to fulfil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.37516180459 2.80592935109 156% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2672299797 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250997041598 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830682478674 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732332936126 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151857627617 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751763266799 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.