Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently, dangerous sports have been increasing around the globe. Some people argue that such sports should be banned whereas others think that it should individuals choice to play these extreme sports. In my opinion, some of the life threatening games should be banned and few of the sports should be carried out by keeping one’s safes in mind.
On the one hand, extreme sports causing severe damage to health should not be allowed due to the reason of causing permanent physical disability. If taken negatively, would eventually lead to mental illness or disinterest about the life. For instance, If bull-running damages the body part, due to which we can not perform day to day activities then it might
give you mental stress for being optimistic about the future. Hence, rather that being involved in such brain tiring situations, these sports should be prohibited.
On the other hand, those who gets fascinated because of the sports performed by themselves need continuous improvement in the activities they would be doing. For the reduction of the boredom of monotonous sports, they prefer such exercise. For example, frequent trekker would be more interested in fungi jumping to skydiving than the regular trekking. Additionally, such sports gives employment to the locals and enhances the economy of the system.
To conclude, Even of hazardous sport activities are risky for the lives, however, those who prefer to take risk with all the equipments in place and with the skills acquired need such activities to exist. Hence, in my opinion, few life-threatening sports such as bull riding, which are without any precautions should be banned. Whereas, other sports like skydiving or scuba diving should be taken place in the observation of skilled people and after all technical issues resolution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ay these extreme sports. In my opinion, some of the life threatening games should be banned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, whereas, after all, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.264604811 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70142438308 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4121712216 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350613204535 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121937857565 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105925532835 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200172426995 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118225269862 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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