As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers

Essay topics:

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.

What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

The importance of work satisfaction, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. Out of the numerous factors, raise in salary and appreciation of hardwork are the most conspicuous ones that motivate someone to give his best towards his job. however, not everyone is fortunate enough to get satisfied with his job; most people spend their whole life with a disliking of their workplace.

What can be a better motivator than money? Absolutely nothing! everyone in this world is working to fullfill his needs and wants, which is not possible without being financially strong. On the other side, some people feel encouragement, if they are given the credit and appreciated for the tasks which they have performed. For instance, a recent survey in Australia reveals that employees who are ignored by their bosses have 80% more chances of demotivating and disappointment toward their jobs.

It's true that everyone wants to love his work, but the reality is majority of people reluctant to go to their offices everyday for various reasons. The reasons could be anything: low wages, safety risk, bullying at workplace or gender discreamination; workers start hating their job. It is a bitter truth that most of the university graduates' expectations shattered as soon as they step in practical world. As an illustration, Norway reported one of the highest job insecurity in the world, where people just want to quit their job because of the factors mentioned above.

To conclude, motivational factors are the keys of a job satisfaction; however, how unreal these factors to be fullfilled in real world are, should not be overlooked.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1872659176 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93410257212 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659176029963 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3325242623 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262816320877 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863050020501 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560305744565 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150938955201 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662350883238 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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