Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether the expansion of supermarkets in some countries would result in the closure of local business and hence result in the death of local communities. In the following contemplation I would discuss that why I totally agree with this viewpoint.
Consumer convenience, time and money saving are the factors that would result in thriving of supermarkets and reduction of local business. The local communities survive on the money they gain from selling goods in their vicinity. Expansion of supermarkets would increase the likelihood of people flooding these places on weekends. Since people nowadays only get weekends for grocery shopping so they would definitely prefer to buy everything under one roof. Employees and working ladies would prefer supermarkets as they do not need to waste their precious time to buy from different small shops. For instance, research states that the sales of local business drastically decreases when supermarkets are established in small towns. This would result in the loss of livelihood of local communities who might migrate to metropolitan cities for earning money.
On the contrary, others argue that the expansion of supermarkets would result in increasing jobs and ease of shopping experience for the local communities. However, I believe that millions of jobs would be lost due to expansion of supermarkets. Since, local business are mostly dependent on artisans and require manual labor therefore thousands of people of the dependent of these skills would loose their jobs. For example, a boutique employees thousands of staff members who are skilled in embroidery, stitching, cutting etc. Such skilled workers would automatically loose jobs as the factory made clothes would be available in cheap prices in supermarkets.
In conclusion, I reiterate that expansion of supermarkets would result in loosing the source of income of local communities. The local communities would need to migrate to bigger cities in search of jobs. Millions of small businesses would permanently die and would ultimately result in the death of local communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47129909366 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9748967203 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492447129909 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0840805596 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.529411765 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265056287471 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102444959139 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08100059291 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199366009609 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629530289139 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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