Education in financial management should be a mandatory component of the school program.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
Throughout the life of a person, there are many financial issues that he or she needs to be able to solve well. Including a financial management course is a must in schools. I will agree and give reasons in the following paragraphs.
The economic elders have been working since childhood, and this has led them to learn economic literacy and increase their financial intelligence. Given the personality, mentality, attitude and lifestyle of childhood, the necessity of a proper financial education and the drive to value creativity and entrepreneurship, it is imperative for parents to take steps to integrate childhood financial management skills into their children. And become their habit.As long as the child is not bothered for money and the money is always given to him in a timely manner and does not see it as a result of his own work, in his mind, work is not worthwhile and therefore not responsible for activities. Given the increasing paternity in families and future problems, it will be very serious.
The child will not only become rich, but with wealth, he will lose it day by day, and he will probably become poor because he has learned the only way to spend money incorrectly, but the way to earn money , Has not learned to maintain and increase it.
In the other hand,Lack of tools, content and lack of knowledge about how to properly finance, unemployment statistics, economic downturn, global change, emerging new jobs, need to be empowered in financial management.One of the reasons for the high unemployment rate in Iran is the lack of entrepreneurial and self-employment skills among young people due to lack of awareness and empowerment in financial matters. This is due to the failure of the educational system to pay for economic literacy education and the lack of proper financial education in families. This issue for Iran, as it is the fourth youngest country in the world, not only will cost the country a great deal, but also if compensated can open up many opportunities for the country's economy.
In conclusion,I believe that financial management is not only effective for the success of individuals, but also contributes to the economic growth of any country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01344412647 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521857923497 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.864974374 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163116801751 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713753637495 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422953010227 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920752487361 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501031965318 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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