Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is believed by some people that children should be taught finance as a subject in schools. In my opinion, I strongly agree that students should ought to be given knowledge on financial aspects as it will not only make them responsible but they will also have value for money.
Certain individuals have this notion that incorporating monetary education in school course of children at a very early age will build a responsible behaviour. They will manage their finance effectively saving money for their future goals and objectives. They must be taught and guided in money management and financial decision making, moreover, making them understand the varied ways of saving and investing money such as bank account and investing in children schemes and the benefits they will endure later. To elucidate, children taught to be responsible in terms of handling money, will be able to pay for their higher education.
Furthermore, making children understand about the hard work and sacrifices their parents do in order to earn money for meeting the basic needs of family thus, they will be more considerate towards spending money on purchasing unrequired things. By teaching children that money do not grow on trees rather than it is earned when their mothers and fathers work day and night not concerned about their own needs and health but about the future of their children, they will understand the importance of money. To exemplify, children when value the hard-earned money for their parents and will spend them on things that they need the most.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that younger generation should be made understand the monetary aspects as this will make them more accountable and answerable as well as they will have a respect for money and will not spend it indecriminately
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09459459459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67441275136 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.292767867 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.8 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100228190794 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549753116635 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301959706975 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837886005595 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309798675572 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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