Essay topics: Marketing strategy for big companies should be placed on offer and discounts? In what ways does this impact their reputation?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in a number of sales strategies such as discounts, offers using in the market. There is a widespread worry that these offers lead item brands to more deterioration. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are number arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that most people like to buy cheap goods. Although these are high banded items, many people gain chances to purchase these kinds of bands. Furthermore, this will cause to reduce the value of these goods. Not only do businessmen increase the number of their customers, but they deteriorate the demand of business. Needless to say, these demerits of discounts and offers in the market have a far-reaching impact on their reputation.
Another pivotal aspect of price cut is that customers wait to buy goods until the next special offer time. Moreover, the demand for the specific item and brand will reduce due to the lack of offer. Most big brands like Apple, Samsung, and HP do not try to offer discounts because they only focused on their brand keeping prices high at all times. Hence, it is apparent why many are against with the discounts and market offers.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that besides some benefits, the drawbacks of reducing prices and offer high discounts on big brands are too dire to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
... of bands. Furthermore, this will cause to reduce the value of these goods. Not only do b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92653061224 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61066916761 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579591836735 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3864957524 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18337532695 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589805640502 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049873603074 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108509524933 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214602568193 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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