Essay topics: Some people say that the Olympic Games no longer have a role to play in the 21st century. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, Olympic games is being the topic of debate whether they play a role in the 21st century. This essay disagrees with the statement that Olympic games no longer play an important role in the current century because It encourages people to take sports as a career and helps us in providing harmony among different countries.
More often, Olympic games bring Sports individuals from various countries into a single place, which is widely considered the greatest sports event. Besides that, Only the brightest talents from different countries are allowed to participate in this event with the ultimate goal of winning a medal for their country. This certainly encourages lot of young individuals who watch it on the Television to pursue a career in sports which attributes to the success of the individual. Indeed, lot of people get to know about different types of sports which certainly helps them choosing a sport. For Instance, PV Sindhu an Olympian from India got inspired from the 2012 Olympic games which motivated her to win a medal the following Olympic games.
Besides that, As People from different countries stay at the same place during the Olympics, Individuals get to know about each other.They even get to know about different cultures and customs which certainly increases harmony between different countries. For Example, Around 1 million people from 100 countries across the world showed up for the London Olympics 2012 which was held for 1 month clearly brought harmony and helped people in understanding about different countries and culture.
To Conclude,Olympic games play an important role in shaping the future of Sports, As it helps lot of people in choosing a career in Sports and it also helps People to acknowledge the cultures of different countries which plays an important role in providing harmony across different countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21926910299 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69508738038 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491694352159 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4032572426 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.1 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171476526161 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860782706885 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882627404984 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145762840261 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113568147259 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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