Essay topics: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few people believe that prolonged prison sentencing is the most favorable way to curtail crime rates. However, some are of the opinion that, alternative methods of punishment can be more effective in lowering down crimes. I believe, long term jail further aggravate the issue, as this will help low level criminal to interact will high level criminal for an extended time period, and this will draw low level criminal in committing more serious crimes once set free.
People who carry positive stance on long term prison believe that, harsh sentencing would keep criminal away from the healthy society and he/she will not be able to contaminate society with their nefarious actions. Consequences of committing crime will keep the society in-check especially, younger generation. People will believe in doing hard work rather indulging in criminal activities. People with this school of thought believe that, this practice will help in reducing number of crimes substantially.
On the other hand, few people hold a different approach to this menace. This group of people suggests alternative ways of punishments to reduce crimes. They are in the favor of prison sentence but they want it short, effective and economical. For example, they believe in 6 months to 01 year of imprisonment, with minimum six month of community service. During their time in prison, inmates should be put into working conditions such as, sewing, repairing, documentation, data entry etc. They need to be taught different skills with practical experience. This will help in two ways; convict will become a part of country’s economic workforce, and government will have reduced expenses on prisons. Community will also benefit from their services. Once free, that person can earn a decent living and country will have more skilled people and fewer burdens on public funds.
To sum it up, If the crime is not serious in nature it should be dealt with a different approach. Governments should work thoroughly in producing innovative and effective and economic ways of punishments rather relying on ineffective and decade’s old punishments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shorts'?
Suggestion: shorts
...vor of prison sentence but they want it short, effective and economical. For example,...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... year of imprisonment, with minimum six month of community service. During their time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33827893175 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76878610756 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575667655786 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3181908693 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9444444444 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165431193171 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612727240645 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622877263365 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10599082626 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027363359304 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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